tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8765423674299337418.post5059802908200289258..comments2023-07-15T07:05:07.687-04:00Comments on PW Creighton: The Surveillance Report: Writing the TideAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01046515540256155412noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8765423674299337418.post-87427620936491658752011-02-14T18:15:13.309-05:002011-02-14T18:15:13.309-05:00Thanks for the comments Michele and Murphy! Yeah, ...Thanks for the comments Michele and Murphy! Yeah, as you can tell, I like to deleve into the deep, dark elements at the heart of everything.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01046515540256155412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8765423674299337418.post-83855956166830277752011-02-14T09:06:58.220-05:002011-02-14T09:06:58.220-05:00Great analogy. When narrative is not well-paced, ...Great analogy. When narrative is not well-paced, it can be likened to a barrage of choppy waves, ineffective and annoying for a reader to wade through. Now, framed into one large swell that sweeps the reader up - as it builds toward its crest - that's exhilarating! <br /><br />Great way to connect those visual dots!<br /><br />MurphyRiley Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817930302085699222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8765423674299337418.post-45428357402692502912011-02-14T09:03:07.657-05:002011-02-14T09:03:07.657-05:00Great post! A wave is the ultimate comparison to w...Great post! A wave is the ultimate comparison to what we strive to achieve. We try to make it flow, yet wonder if it does to the reader. Always a learning process. Thanks for this perfect explanation. Such good info!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com